Hi pals! So, after we finished filming and editing (finally), we sent out our video to a few friends! We got a lot of really great feedback, and actually agree with a lot of it. This is what they said: So, our first friend who responded was Ludgi. She said that she really liked our idea and video for the most part, but there was definitely room for improvement. Mainly in the editing department, she mentioned how our voice over sounded a little to crisp and that it didn’t fit in with the video. She also commented on a few other things, like awkward scenes. Then, Enzo, our other friend, gave us feedback. He said it was pretty good, but also mentioned the voice over thing. He also said that our script sounded a bit weird and rushed and that we should edit it to fit better. The next person we sent it to, Alyssa, gave us different feedback. We had gotten so much about the voiceover that we told her not to mention it because we were already going to re-record it. So in